Digital Devil Talker

This was great, I loved the vibe overall of the demonic possession of the world and the many different characters. I also liked the 4th wall break type of moment where the character began questioning why they were talking to "themselves". However, I think this was in need of some editing down, or more dialogue placed into each speech bubble because it was a lot of clicking to get through conversations, for not a lot of conflict. I think you need to do a bit to make these conversations count more, potentially by removing some details, even though they were great to see. Think less is more, and really get at specifics with each dialogue choice. Also feel free to add more characterization for these characters. Visually they were quite unique, but linguistically, I didn't really get the vibe that they were separate types of characters from their dialogue. - TA Janine

Interesting protagonist; it's amusing how scatterbrained they are and leads to some equally interesting and amusing choices proposed to the player.
This font is a bit hard to read though, especially as someone who's dyslexic, maybe considered finding another similarly tech themed font 

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